Thursday, 25 February 2016

Book Review: Dead Air by Jon Schafer

When a man suffering from a rare disease receives a debilitating head injury, the treatment given him mutates his affliction into a highly contagious virus. As the disease spreads, it first kills its victims and then reanimates them into beings that are compelled to eat ravenously and crave human flesh.
 

In Clearwater, Florida, Steve is following the stories of people attacking each other, but is unaware of the situation. When Heather, a Sheriff’s Deputy who is interested in Steve as more than a friend, tells him the real story of cities being overrun by the dead, Steve makes plans to barricade himself in the fifteen story bank building where the radio station manages has its suite of offices.

After locking himself in with Heather and eight others, the group continues to broadcast live as the dead surround their redoubt and search for a way in. Coming across a ten year-old girl that is immune to the disease, the group tries to find a way to transport her across a land filled with the flesh-eating dead to a government facility where she can be studied and a cure found.


My Review:
I liked the start of this book. A car accident victim with a rare condition that leaves him hungry all the time, is given up as about to die by doctors in the hospital. They decide to do some extra tests for research purposes on his brain but what they do triggers a reaction in his condition and turns him into a zombie. How realistic this might be is open to debate but I put that aside and enjoyed seeing something a bit different as the reason for Patient Zero. I also enjoyed the way the scenes in the hospital were written and I was amused by the interaction between the obnoxious doctor and his angry and very un-PC nurse!

The problem starts with the characters. The doctor was obnoxious but he got his so that was ok by me. The rest of the cast include Meat the rude alcoholic radio DJ who does nothing but party and makes me want to hit him. His long suffering boss Steve is a bit on the bland side for a hero. He has a girlfriend he doesn't really love, a lack of patience with those around him ie the boy at the store who was doing him a favour and we just get so much pointless information about his life. His girlfriend is a bit of a cardboard cutout with no personality and a desire to spend all his money.

We also have the characters who are just introduced so we can see them die, so we didn't need all the description of who they were and why they were there. There was Anton the wifebeater whose long suffering wife seeks an amusing way out of her situation, the drunken rednecks who go out to shoot the rabid people and use up all their ammo before the dead show up, and the knife wielding ticket tout at the stadium. A lot of time is spent on these characters instead of showing us our main MCs to follow. We barely see Heather in the beginning of the book and she was the most interesting character.

The book also suffers from being pretty slow in getting to the main point of the plot, which is the survivors joining together to barricade themselves at the radio station. Instead we follow Steve going bowling, Steve going for supplies, Steve meeting his girlfriend, plus all the filler incidents. I just wanted the story to move along a bit with less description.

This was a decent enough book. Minor niggles about plot and character can be easily ignored if you are engaged with the book, and I was, until we got the plot twist. The US government know what the virus is now but instead of looking for a cure or prevention, they decide to release it round the world to ensure nobody can invade them. WTF??? Everyone agrees to it without an objection or comment of surprise or horror about killing billions of people? I'm afraid that was a deal breaker for me and I didn't continue with it. It is a pity because the book had real potential. A rating of 2.5 is fairer but I don't have that available on this blog.
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Book Review: Relax it's just the flu by Pete Thorsen

This story centers on a pandemic of a very virulent and deadly strain of the flu. So deadly a strain of the flu that much of the population succumbs to this new disease. A small group of survivors in a hospital in Montana face the situation in which they now find themselves. They each have to decide for themselves what they will make of the future as they come to the conclusion that their safety and very survival is now just in their own hands.

As always in my stories there is no foul language or sex though there is some violence. 


My Review:
The book starts with the info dump about Hal and how much he loves to get into fights with people. He pretty much sounds like a sociopath that you would want to stay well away from rather than the hero of a book. He is cold, anti-social, abrupt and unpleasant. I didn't like him from the minute we were introduded to him. I also found it annoying that Hal was being talked about as Hal one minute, then we'd switch to his POV. I hate it when authors can't make up their mind which way to tell the story as this switching is annoying.

The writing is really weird. On two pages of my ereader, the word flu is repeated 22 times, sometimes several times in one sentence. To say that it is repetitive and annoying is putting it mildly. Yes, we get that it is the flu, and you don't need to keep bashing us over the head with it to make your point! That got boring very quickly. Here is an example.

'Also for most of of those that caught this flu and lived through it, the flu screwed up their brains somehow, possibly from the very high temps of 106 to 110 degrees and even sometimes higher that were commonly seen in those that caught this flu.'

The dialogue is also very strange and it doesn't sound like the way people would have a conversation. It is very formal and abrupt in places and then we get a long descriptive waffle around it which is equally annoying. Punctuation is selective and placed where the author feels like it and the sentence structure is poor.

When you add in the fact that the book is very slow and not much happens, well I got bored with it quickly. A short story must grab you quickly to get you interested in it but this book failed on every level and I was happy not to have to finish it. I deleted the others books on my ereader by this author as a quick glance at them showed the same strange style and dialogue. I don't recommend this and I won't be reading anything else by the author. 
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Wednesday, 24 February 2016

Book Review: Dead Hunger by Eric A Shelman


An epidemic that transforms humans into zombie-like creatures has swept over the eastern United States and quite possibly the world, and Flex Sheridan doesn't like it one bit. In an effort to save his younger sister, Flex re-connects with Gem Cardoza, his former girlfriend. Together they take his six-year-old niece Trina, the only uninfected survivor of his sister's family, and his infected sister Jamie, and make a run from Florida to his isolated home in Lula, Georgia. 

As they head north, they encounter Hemp Chatsworth. A naturalized U.S. citizen, Hemp is British, and holds a degree in Epidemiology and Mechanical Engineering, along with crossbow-wielding Charlie Sanders and dog, this group uses street smarts, book smarts, and technology to defend against the new "Abnormals" that walk the earth. Hemp is also compelled to learn how they got this way, and reverse the condition to save Flex's sister. So grab your machine gun and take a ride in their fortified vehicles and mobile lab; you're going to want these people on your side when the Dead Hunger... (Please note: This book contains strong language.)

My Review:
At the start of the book the dead have already risen and we join the team on a mission. Flex is thinking back to how it began with him trying to get to his sister Jamie, her husband and two daughters, which leads to the rest of the book being a flashback. I hate it when authors do this because we are being told who is alive and dead before we get to the flashback which shows you all of the events taking place. If we had started with Jamie's phone call and Flex rushing over to see what happened, it would have been full of tension and much more enjoyable instead of being spoiled in advance! Removing that prologue and sorting a few niggles might have produced another half or full star for my rating of the book. (NB before you yell about half stars not being available on GR, I'm referring to my blog rating)

Flex is a guy on a mission to save his family and try to find a cure for his infected sister. The scenes where he travels to Jamie's house and finds out what happened are very well written and would have been tense and exciting if we hadn't already been told who survived. Flex and Gem have a good chemistry and the fact that they had a relationship before the book starts means we don't have to go through all the love angst and 'getting together' stuff that annoys me in zombie books that feature romance. Besides, this is not romance based, just two people with a connection that spend most of their time fighting the undead or grabbing supplies and rescuing people. The one thing about them that annoyed me was their obsession with drugs. Seriously, how many books in this genre feature dope smoking characters? It really bugs me and I don't like it in my MCs.

I like Hemp and not just because he is British. He is a smart man who has a lot of ideas for protection and defence, which I found interesting, although at times the descriptions got just a bit too technical for my liking and I found it difficult to imagine what was actually happening. I think it needs to be simplified a bit for us ordinary people! I also liked the amount of action in the book. WE had the events at the house, the police station, the CDC and the housing area, all of which I thought were nicely written and kept you wondering what was coming next. You must have plenty zombies in a zombie novel after all and this does not disappoint!

I'm not as keen on the idea of these intelligent zombies who are finding a way to store the bodies in a cool place to preserve their food supply, but it did lead to an exciting rescue attempt so I put my preferences to one side and enjoyed the action. Having zombies able to spray a mist from their eyes to make victims pass out was maybe a bit much for me though it was certainly different. I guess it makes a change to see that in a zombie book, but I hope the smart zombie thing isn't taken too far in this series if I read on.

One big plot hole that bugged me was the police station search. Flex goes to a lot of trouble to find a pharmacy to get something to make Trina sleep in the car so she doesn't see the zombies and victims they pass. Yes, a good idea, along with a big quilt for her to hide under to be out of sight in the car while Flex and Gem take care of business. So why drug her, then carry her into the dark police station, rendering you a hand short for using the guns, not checking all the bodies are really dead and having the zombies and gunfire inside waking her up? How could they take a young kid into a building that was dark and full of dead bodies, that they hadn't fully secured? Crazy stuff. The other plot hole is how they lie to Trina all the time about her mother being away, yet discuss Jamie being dead and infected and locked up in the van outside while the girl is sitting at their feet-yet Trina doesn't know anything??? Baffling.

Despite a few flaws this is a decent, action packed zombiefest with good characters and plenty going on. It is well worth a read and I'll probably continue with the series.
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Book Review: Horror Within Anthology

****8 Book Boxed Set**** For a limited time at $0.99! Something for every horror lover in this 831 page set. 

Armand Rosamilia - Dying Days
Travis Tufo - Red Sky
Tony Baker - From The Ashes
Eric A. Shelman - Dead Hunger
Ian Woodhead - The Unwashed Dead
Robert Chazz Chute - This Plague Of Days
Mark Tufo - Zombie Fallout + Bonus Short Mayan Prophecy
Scott Nicholson/ J.T. Warren - Meat Camp


My Review:
These anthologies can be very hit and miss but are usually 99p to try which makes it a risk worth taking for me to look at new authors. I have already reviewed a couple of these books so won't be reviewing them again and I have a copy of one waiting to be read on my tbr so will review it later.

1)Scott Nicholson-Meat Camp (0 stars)
I have not enjoyed any of the books I've read by this author so I should have just skipped it as I thought this offering was really dreadful. Jenny the 22 year old virgin did not screw around at college like her friends which means she is obviously a freak and should be ridiculed through the book. Nice. Her 'understanding' boyfriend is a moron who keeps trying to seduce her. His method? Throw a condom at her and see if she says yes. We also have the cast of oversexed teens drinking and getting high, the billionaire property developer trying to evict decent people, the money grabbing woman determined to betray her family so that juvenile delinquents at her camp can keep annoying local people, and a complete slut of a woman is having sex all the time while planning a murder. By chapter 9 all we has was sex, moronic characters, more sex, talking about sex, thinking about sex, why Jenny was a nut for not having sex and something bad rustling the bushes from time to time. Boring and a waste of time.

2)Mark Tufo-Zombie Fallout-already reviewed

3)Robert Chazz Chute-This Plague of Days (1 star)
I didn't like the way it was written. Vague descriptions, weird characters, lacking a good meaty plot to grab and grip the reader.

4)Ian Woodhead-The Unwashed Dead-already reviewed

5)Eric A Shelman-Dead Hunger
I liked this one so I'm doing a full review seperate from this.

6)Tony Baker-Survivors of the Dead
Have my own copy on ereader and will read and review it later.

7-Travis Tufo-Red Sky (unrated)
When I realised what the story was about I knew it wasn't really my thing. I'm not greatly intrerested in reading about a guy in the Russian Army so I skipped on from this.

8-Armand Rosamilia-Dying Days(1 star)
Started this one and didn't like it at all. The characters were horrific-I mean who cares about makeup in a zombie apocalypse or wants lip gloss as the dead are coming towards you? Can't be bothered with all the sex stuff either-don't find it realistic than when you're fighting for your life, you care about cute guys and makeup and who fancies you.

This anthology was more miss than hit but it was worth getting for Dead Hunger which I liked. It let me try a new author even though I didn't like the book. Worth the 99p certainly.
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Tuesday, 23 February 2016

Book Review: The Valley by Rick Jones


In a dystopian future, a self-contained valley in Argentina serves as the 'far arena' for those convicted of a crime. Inside the Valley: carnivorous dinosaurs generated from preserved DNA. The goal: cross the Valley to get to the Gates of Freedom. The chance of survival: no one has ever completed the journey. Convicted of crimes with little or no merit, Ben Peyton and others must battle their way across fields filled with the world's deadliest apex predators in order to reach salvation. All the while the journey is caught on cameras and broadcast to the world as a reality show, the deaths and killings real, the macabre appetite of the audience needing to be satiated as Ben Peyton leads his team to escape not only from a legal system that's more interested in entertainment than in justice, but also from the predators of the Valley.

My Review:
Prime Time have combined prisoner punishment with TV entertainment and produced a game show watched around the world. This is The Valley, where criminals earn a second chance in society if they can trek across 40 miles of rough terrain incluing forests, rivers and gorges to the exit gate with no time limit. Each person in the group of twelve has a pack, one with a map, some with weapons, some with food and water or other survival tool. Nobody has everything needed to survive, forcing them to act as a team. The other problem is that the game zone features a wide range of specially bred dinosaurs...

Ooh I loved the sound of this book and its cover! I loved The Running Man film, and I loved the Jurassic Park films. This combines both into a tension filled book with lots of dinosaur action, corrupt game show people and bloodshed! Can you just imagine getting the chance to watch a show where real criminals like serial killers, rapists and paedophiles get chased by bad ass dinosaurs? It would be a hit in most countries! Of course in this book our hero Ben is guilty only of giving his food ration to a friend whose family is starving, but when he appears on the show his crimes are said to be much more serious to get the crowd baying for his blood. However, not everyone is innocent and the people he has to trust include a serial killer and a Yakuza hitman. 

So do you love dinosaurs? Of course you do, and we see a wide range of them in the game zone. T Rex, raptors, Spinosaurus, Kronosaurus to name just a few. The action is pretty much non stop as we switch between the group in mortal peril as dinosaurs attack them, and the TV production crew who track their movements and plan what is going to be coming their way next. Unknown to the group, a new breed of dinosaur is ready to be unleashed on them with very dramatic consequences. The book was an exciting read and you were always wondering what horror would be unleashed next and who was going to become dinner!

I liked the range of characters in the book. There is obvious mistrust between them, especially as the serial killer is with them and they know that he could attack anyone at any moment to save his own skin. I am a naturally suspicious person and I enjoy books where I can think about how might betray who or who will die next and this book kept me very happy on that aspect. I liked the group dynamic and the way they are forced to stay together, and I did like a few characters in particular. I liked having the impulse to shout 'RUN!' on more than one occasion, especially in the opening game to get them into The Valley. I also like the way the story changed as the end approached and all the twists that came with it.

Niggles? I was disappointed that we didn't get a chance to see the other game show in production by the company as it sounded brutal on a whole new level! Seriously, there was nothing that I didn't enjoy about the book. If you love dystopia, dinosaurs and psycho game shows, you will hopefully like this one! I really want to see this made into a film!
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